Don't Drink the Water
Glistening, flowing,
cooling, and clear. All was needed was a drop. Just one. At least that was what
I was used to. As it trickled down the faucet, it seemed as if it were mocking
me, “c’mon, just a sip.” No! All I could remember was my teachers telling me
“don’t drink the water,” “don’t let the water get in your mouth,” “only drink
from the bottle,” “don’t drink the water.” My hand reached for the silver
handle, and as I twisted it to the right, a shower of water was released. I
knew that once I entered, I would be in danger. Each step I took, my body
became tense and I could hear my heart beating. My foot was the first to be
sacrificed to this unknown enemy and as each toe met the cold glass, I knew I
had to do this one way or another.
The
water beat against my back, like rain on a stormy day. All that was needed now
was to convince my head to get under. I felt like a child again, just learning
how to swim, unable to stick my head under the water. It was a battle with
myself, and I knew which side would have to win; my head had to go under. I
knew it was a risk because water could easily run down my face and into my
mouth, but it was a chance I had to take. So, I held my breath and quickly
moved my head into the flurry of water.
I
let the last strand of hair fall back down to its regular position and let the
water rush over it. Turning the silver handle to the left, the water stopped
falling and I could finally stop holding my breath. Even though I was out of
the water, there was still water sticking to my body and my face. With two
hands I brought the snow white towel to my face. As it absorbed the water, I
could finally feel safe. Once I was sure I had dried all the remaining water on
my body, I hung up the towel and quickly got dressed. It was late and my
roommate still had to take a shower and ready herself for bed. I got my
toothbrush and filled a glass with water from the faucet, intending to rinse my
mouth with it when I was done brushing my teeth. Picking up my purple
toothbrush, I once again made sure not to put it under the faucet. I took a
water bottle and poured a little onto the bristles of the toothbrush. “Three
weeks of this, how am I going to survive?” Everything was so different than what
I was used to in America. I put my toothbrush down and picked up the glass
ready to rinse my mouth when I remembered; I had gotten the water from the
faucet! I set the glass down, disgusted. I absolutely did not want to get sick
and I knew I would do everything I could to remember not to drink the water. As
I gathered my things, I completely forgot about the glass of water, so when I
left the bathroom, I left that glass of water sitting on the counter.
Stepping
into the bedroom of the hotel room, the smell of fresh linen surrounded me. The
bed’s white sheets with white pillows looked like a cloud, waiting for me to
hop on. Throwing my clothes on top of the unzipped suitcase, I skipped a few
steps and did a cannonball into my bed. Pulling up the covers so only my eyes
popped out, made me feel safe and warm. In bed, I was away from the water, away
from the unknown, away from anything that would ruin the next three weeks of my
life. Suddenly, I realize I am not alone. “Hey, uhhhhh Megan, are you, um, done
in the bathroom?” I quickly sit up straight, pulling the blanket off of my
face. “Oh yeah, go ahead. I am all done in there for tonight,” I say nicely. I
know it has been a long day for everyone, so I try to be as patient as
possible. “Haha, alright. I guess I will be out soon,” she says as she makes
her way into the bathroom empty handed. “Wait, you forgot your things!” I
remind her. She comes out of the bathroom and gently hits her head, “Silly me,
always forgetting things.” Once again, she makes her way back into the
bathroom, and when I hear the door click, I pull the cloud of blankets over my
face again. Being alone, I think of a lot of things. From missing home to the
next three weeks, I cannot stop thinking about everything. I realize that I am
overthinking, so I shake my head, trying to erase all the thoughts rushing
through my brain. Now that my brain is clear I start to doze, but I am
unexpectedly interrupted. I sit up pulling the blanket back and I see that my
roommate it back in the room, unshowered. “Is everything okay?” I ask her
confusingly. “Yep, just forgot my shampoo,” she says to me shaking the bottle
of Pantene shampoo. For the third time, she shuts the bathroom door and I fall
backward on my back. “I am probably not going to get any sleep tonight,” I say
to myself. Giving up on trying to get sleep right now, I switch on the
television only to find shows and movies in Mandarin. After switching through
about fifteen channels, I settle for a movie in English about boxing. After the
main character and his buddy say something funny I start to laugh and get cozy
in my bed once again.
CRASH! My eyes jolt open and I turn my head to the right and
glance at the alarm clock. About a half hour has passed since I last checked
the clock. “I must have fallen asleep,” I think to myself. Then I remember the
huge noise I heard that came from the bathroom. The bathroom door quickly
opens, and my roommate stumbles out into the room. I look at her and I can see in
her eyes that something is wrong. “What is it? What was that noise? Are you
okay?” I ask her quickly. As I speak she stares at me, not moving, or saying a
word. I jump out of bed and run to the bathroom. I step on to the moist tiles
and glance around the room. When my eyes reach the counter, my eyes fix on the
glass of water that I left there. I take two steps and pick up the glass.
Turning over the glass of water, I can now see that the glass is completely
empty.
Labels: Megan McK
2 Comments:
great sensory detail! very interesting point of view.
The topic of this story was really interesting and made me wonder where this would've taken place. I really liked how you incorporated your characters thoughts into the story.
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